flash fiction…55

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at the beach, with great care, she set him down.

she turned to spread the towel, and he was gone.

turning back, her heart sank and then exploded into gripping fear.

searching, waves and sand, alone she panicked.

yesterdays storm, created a drop.

he sat below it, using a tin spoon.

she saw it flash.

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Published in: on August 11, 2007 at 2:11 pm  Comments (4)  

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  1. I like it. Your writing has a touch of poetry to it.

  2. Great 55!!

  3. Very nice. I didn’t know about flash 55 …

    friendly neighborhood pedant suggests

    “her heart sank, exploded, then collapsed into gripping fear”

    hard to see how an explosion can grip anything.

  4. shut up and go to hawaii


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